The opening to our Rom-Com is almost done! We are now at the point where it is just the small details that need to be amended. Our group decided that it would be useful and progressive to ask a selection of our target audience to view it and give us their feed back:
During one of our lessons we also asked some year 13 media students to view our opening as we thought they would have a more specified feedback for us. They are also are target audience so it would be more audience research. We bullet pointed their comments and suggestions after;
- The shot of the kettle was too long and needed to be shortened
- The longer poses of our female character needed to be slightly shorter
- The transition from the polaroid photograph to 'real life' needed to have further adjustments for to improve the continuity
- The editing on the beat was done well
- There was a good use of titles
Next lesson we will begin to take these aspects into consideration and alter our opening accordingly. By doing this we not only improve it but it tailors it increasingly to our target audience as a selection of them have had direct imput into it.
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